All Comments on 'Turning of the Stars Ch. 04'

You can see him working from a mise-en-scène. He has a theme (the hog tie), ingredients (the vibrator), and a carefully determined sequence for blending them all together.

The result? Gourmet sex! And highly erotic reading.

Are there really any men like him left? I want one. Totally hot chapter and I can't wait for more. Take off work, quit school, do whatever you need to do. Keep writing!

This is an absolutely amazing chapter. SO HOT. One of the best I've read on Literotica!

Where can I get a Grant of my own? Dear Lord, that was probably the best and hottest thing I've ever read! Please, please, please - I'm begging you - post another chapter soon!!!

I second Kissntell13.

Anna was right, WOW!

In definite agreement with the others about the heat, but just wanted to add that my favourite part was actually the beginning and their argument! I really liked how you took us with them through the conflict, into their thought processes and the deepening of their feelings for each other. Really well done - thanks Panthem!

Hottness!!!!

Just so, so good... With two lovely characters too! I really like them both and want to know more about them. That is just as important to me as the seriously hot sex you are writing about (kudos, by the way!) Their interaction, as someone else said, is so cool - two people, both with very different backgrounds, finding this bond - it's just extremely compulsive reading, I really want to know more about Anna and her experience of growing up in a commune, and Grant is just so interesting - his life was obviously so different, but very little has been said about growing with a film star as a father and how you deal with that.and what he had to go through, eg jail, and then coming through the other side. Not sure if you will dwell on this as you go on through the story, but just looking forward to what you next write - it's very intelligent in my opinion. So, with thanks.

Damn! That was hot! I want to be controlled like that!

love you writing and loving this storey

No story at all in this chapter. Nothing but sex but I guess that's why we are reading it on this site. Kinda liked the fact that the previous chapters had more story and some sex in between.

From the conflict to the sex, your writing is in top form. This story has the key qualities of the best stories; misunderstanding not drawn out unnecessarily, realistic fears and desires, intelligent dialogue, and sex that is a little bit raunchy without being vulgar. A pleasure to read.

Oooooooh WOW WeeeeeeeThank you Panthem!

wow....just wow.

This is my favorite series! Every now and then I come back and re-read it. Grant is such a sexy character, and I really like Anna, too. She's refreshing. Please write more!!! You're a fantastic author!

WOW that was... GOOD LORD... can't think of words to describe it!

after one, you can't quit--you need another one. This story just keeps getting hotter. I'm enjoying it immensely.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

not romance anymore. and you have forgotten about the characters. you would think after a month he would at least know her class schedule. or that they could talk to each other about their lives outside of the bedroom. oh well.

11000+ words to describe one sex act? In romance? This is turning toward BDSM.

I was greatly enjoying the story until this chapter. No romance, hardly any story, and wondering why he's not more familiar with her schedule at this point and if they do anything with their time together except have sex. Developing the characters and their relationship would have been more interesting than him springing BDSM on her in an overly long bondage scene that I wound up skimming. Not sure if I'll bother to continue with the series.