All Comments on 'Turning the Tables Ch. 04'

I liked the way you opened up with a dream sequence. At first, I didn't know where you were going with it but I really liked the way you brought it full circle in the end. It's a departure from your other chapters, but it adds interest and dramatic contrast, and I can't wait to see where you take it from here. Keep up the good work. I like your writing style.

I'm delighted to see a continuation of this fine series-and never satisfied, I'm now begging for the next chapter. There is much to be covered in this relationship. Have the utmost confidence that you will cover it, and well.

I'm delighted to see a continuation of this fine series-and never satisfied, I'm now begging for the next chapter. There is much to be covered in this relationship. Have the utmost confidence that you will cover it, and well.

Need more where they finally give in to their urges and fuck.