by Icecubez
If there's not a part two, I'm going to reach through the monitor and strangle you. :-)
Please, more. This is a great story and could go on for quite a while. You've got a winner.
Story line is good, and I'd welcome a sequel, but only if the multiple easy grammar/spelling issues are resolved.
A part two would be most appreciated. Very well written story. Slight grammar issue, but still really good.