All Comments on 'Twenty Questions'

by Icecubez

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
There better be a part two

If there's not a part two, I'm going to reach through the monitor and strangle you. :-)

Please, more. This is a great story and could go on for quite a while. You've got a winner.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
LOSE

Jesus Christ, learn the difference between 'lose' and loose'

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Agree with other commenters

Story line is good, and I'd welcome a sequel, but only if the multiple easy grammar/spelling issues are resolved.

SerpensiumSerpensiumover 12 years ago
excellent

A part two would be most appreciated. Very well written story. Slight grammar issue, but still really good.

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