All Comments on 'Twenty Years to Life Ch. 02'

by Evil Alpaca

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Landrious1Landrious1about 19 years ago
Seriously Sexy!

Very well laid story! I like that you put real human problems in the mix. I hope this isn't the end I'd REALLY like to read more about these characters. As I've said before I think you are very talented. Please keep them coming.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uabout 19 years ago
wow....

i don't know how you do these long pieces....something i haven't tried my hand at yet... but you do it beautifully...

great job...

see ya on the boards soon i guess..

XXOO

18rabbit18rabbitabout 19 years ago
Really, really well done.

I have to say, this is the first series that really made me get the appeal of D&S. If your name hadn't been on it, I might not have tried reading it, and that would have been a loss. Thanks for another great submission!

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftalmost 15 years ago
Very Good

How come you write with so much insight, your totaly on the mark with the depression(my personal experience), and kind light bondage that I'm comfortable reading about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Isabel Is Completely Unsympathetic

Another member of the 1%... with the expected gap where a soul should reside. 1 star.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 2 years ago

Why do we need those horrible happenings for discovering love or stupidity or selfcentered behavior or arrogance or whatever humans are able for ....... 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝✨💝

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