All Comments on 'Twice Bitten'

What a wonderful idea, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I hope there will be more.

This was a great story.It was well written and the things that fantasies are made of. It makes me wish I was her because really, what's better than amazingly handsome twins that want to do deliciously naughty things to your body?

I highly enjoyed reading this submission. Personal pleasure is not something you read about often. Good job. I also enjoyed the sex between both sets of twins. Threesomes always gets the blood pumping.

you HAVE to write more about these three. You're an excelent writer, pls keep it up.

I loved it! You have to write more about these three! Please!

Wow that was amazing, I loved it! Which is unusual because I don't usually go for nonhuman erotica. I was just going through your work, you're an excellent writer by the way. It makes me wish I was her too. ;D As others said, please write more about this three!

Wow. If this could be called a page turner, i would go there. You're an amazing story teller. Please keep it up!

I can read more chapters on this story all day if i had to! Great story, intensly erotic! Why not have the father of the twins join in a threesome?

this story was perfect. I loved the fierce dark sexuality it had. I hope you'll write more vampire stories in the future

This has to be one of my favorite stories. It started off funny as hell, and then it ventured towards a beautiful sex scene that got me so wet...

You are a fantastic writer, would love to read more like this. Great story.

I loved this story. Already read it twice and decided to save it as a favorite. Great job and I hope to see more.

I loved this story.

i could picture the vampires brilliantly.

i love vampire stories, and this one stood out.

please create another chapter! i need to read more!

Thanks!!

omg that was one of the best stories i ever read please write more and more!! <3 <3 <3

God i love how this sexy story ends! twin vampires n a maiden having sex really makes me wet while readin this,hope to read more of these twin vampire stories from ya!

Great pacing and structure. Would benefit from an edit though -- barley vs barely, weighting my options vs weighing my options.

OMGGG (oh my goodness) that was an amazing story, nothing slimy or ugly. i love this kind of story. you have to write more to it. pleeeeaaassee just for me?????????

That was Amazing!!!!! Oh so jealous of her! Had to read that one twice.

Wonderful story. Very well written. :)

That was amazing definitely going into the favorites pile. Now to read it again. =-D

two words for you HMMMM YUM!!!! :)

Twice Bitten, in my opinion, is one of the best erotic stories I've read. It was not only well written, and extremely descriptive, but took hold of the sexy, lust filled vampire image many people love. I always look for stories like this, and I'm excited that this was one I've found! I absolutley loved this story!!!

I read this with my lover... It was so descriptive, and beautifully written, it had us both ready to go and go and go. Haven't been so turned on by a short story in years! I'm bookmarking this for futture reads.

sexy and brilliantly written. one of the best i've read. it was so hot i cant hold off touching myself any longer!

Loved the fuck out of this one!!! So sexy....masculine and deliciously so with twin brothers filling her up gloriously..................uuuuuuuuummmmmmmmm hummmmmmmmmmm. Lovely!!

Beyond erotic ;)

Great story! I really enjoyed it!!

I totally loved your story ... vampires always have an erotic effect on me ... LOL !!!

I guess this is true for most readers of the genre.

Yes, they are hot and sexy, and just perfect in this story. Thanx so much for making my dreams that much sweeter

Can u please do a part two