All Comments on 'Twin Cousins'

Wonderful first part. I enjoyed reading this story, I can't wait to read part 2.

Some proof reading is needed before your next chapter is published. I enjoyed the plot line and can see many possiblities for further adventures with the cousins. Please submit next chapter soonest!!!!!!!

Some proof reading is needed before your next chapter is published. I enjoyed the plot line and can see many possiblities for further adventures with the cousins. Please submit next chapter soonest!!!!!!!

Dexxa, very good for a first story. Only thing I can suggest is try slowing down on actual cousin sex. Dont make it a wam bam story. Develop some emotion in the story. look forward to part 2.

Good story

Great story, please continue!

Great story.

what the hell no incest no taboo and no second chapter. this would have been better unposted or in the erotic couples area NOT HERE. do us all a favor and either finish it now or delete it now it's no good the way it is.

That was so HOT. I can't wait to read the next chapter(s).

Great start! Unfortunately, either you've given up, been hit by a truck, or you're nearly as much of a procrastinator as I am :-).

Just a suggestion: The protagonist doesn't have to have a super-sized cock for the story to be good, especially as you know how to have him pleasure the girl before using the cock. Of course you can't very well shrink Steve's cock now, unless you rewrite parts of this story.

And ALL the girls being model material is a bit unrealistic - makes it seem a bit more like just a fantasy. Admittedly they'd be all dolled up for the party, and a sexually frustrated 18yo boy is going to see them with rose-coloured glasses, but saying most of them looked like model material would be just a touch more realistic.

I know you're doing this for free, so I can't make demands, but please continue the story.

I'd be happy to help out with proofreading and editing if you want. I can't write stories like this, but I am good at "tweaking" someone else's hard work, and I've been nicknamed "the proof-reader from hell!"

What happened next?

When are you posting the next part?

This one really made me wet

Post the next part quickly

I really loved this one

Wow what a wonderful fantasy keep going awaiting more and looking forward to the twins jumping Steve next in a hot menage a trois

Please write a sequel