All Comments on 'Twins'

Great story! Would hope to see how the twins get the evidence and continue with the trist. Thanks.

Most arousing, spoiled only by a few typos and mis-spellings.

Manilla is an envelope. Vanilla is an ice cream or really boring sex.

Should be in Non Consent or reluctance, Consent obtained by blackmail is not consent so the sex is rape nothing more, nothing less

This stiry is iver the top,, but read it right ti the end,, good stuff,, needs mor thes womaen wil habve a feats of 4 men

Can we hear more? Great story thanks for a well written story with lots of potential for a great next chapter!

Manfred

Loved it. please keep writing. Also need chapter 6 to Holy Orders.

I tried to recall the name of the main character, but I don't know if it was ever told.

I was hoping that Dave's pal would wind up with Kathy, and Dave would wind up with Clair.

I think Dave was a little too rough for Kathy, and would be great with Clair, because she seems to like it rough.

A sweet dream though.

Just the thought of being able to fuck twins is out of sight, and so hot.

Thanks for the read

Decent writing and a great story idea have this chapter desperate for a sequel. I would agree that this chapter should be in non-consent, but the obvious progression of the story is to get the two girls back together, as they probably were in school. Hence the incest. I realize being in-laws makes it incest but, really, isn't sister/sister incest just so much hotter?

Even if it takes a while, I'm willing to wait.

I would really like to know. "1*" !

If you wish to judge brain size i at least can spell my OWN name unlike yet another anonymous

Mikro

I like it! It's a good story but you could add a bit more background on other charaters like Donald and Dean, mabey even Dave.

So many possibilities. The sisters already have accepted being whored out for instance. Then there is the punish the hubbies bit. Also, being good religious girls, now sluts, there is the question of birth control and possible pregnancy. Pleases do bring that possibility up. It is sad when one reads sex stories that are devoid of what sex is really about, which is procreation, or possible procreation.

I do enjoy your work, and this noncon story is ripe for continuance.

Thank you for a good story.