All Comments on 'Twins' Summer of Discovery Ch. 02'

Gotta love twin incest! From your Master and most devoted fan!

Now hurry up with the revenge!

This is a good storyline but the stilted writing limits the erotic affects of the story. If the author polishes up their writing skills just a bit, I'll be looking forward to future efforts.

I hope this is just the start of something better. Please continue with your work, like what happens in college, etc.

Great storyline. Keep up the good work.

so-so story it was good until you started the spanking then it got ruined when you put in the master slave shit it never works usually she gets hurt or mad and tells the parents and he is disowned keep it realistic and believable

The sex itself is fairly hot, but the author really needs to work on dialogue...especially since there is so much of it in this story. Kinda hard to stay hot when every other sentence is an unbearable cheesy, unrealistic comment. If you couldn't say it without sounding moronic, the same rule should apply to your characters. Improve that, and you'd really have something.

Started out a good story as another said, but I wonder if the brother is not tempting the sister to be a Lorena Bobbit. LOL The clown has to sleep sometime.

i love it

That was fucking sick

the dialogue is very poorly written. and the story ends here - i wish i had known it was incomplete - i should have looked first. so i gave it 1 star. i like the plot, and thought the characters improved from 1 to 2. but........