by dinstigator
great story... keep it up!! but i thought rachel had divorced from her husband?
i really enjoyed your story and hope to continue reading it,should you write any more chapters....
I love what i've read so far. I REALLY hope to read ch. 09 before to long.
you need to do mother and dughter at the same time - that's always been a fantasy of mine
you screwed up again in chapter 6 you say kellys mom and dad got divorced but in chapter 8 you say kellys dad died which is it and try to keep your story straight it makes it very confusing when you keep changing the facts from chapter to chapter
Who cares if the hubby died after the divorce. This is a great series. I just read it all today and can't wait till chapter 9.
The fact that he died or the fact they divorced really didn't matter to me. I write often and usually pick up on things like that, but I was too turned on to care. I was disappointed to see it stopped after this story. Please write more! You are so great, ill always ask you to write more. By the way, are you single? Hehe.
The fact that he died or the fact they divorced really didn't matter to me. I write often and usually pick up on things like that, but I was too turned on to care. I was disappointed to see it stopped after this story. Please write more! You are so great, ill always ask you to write more. By the way, are you single? Hehe.
This story so far is great. When is the next chapter going to cum out.
Wow that was a great story. I read the whole thing today and had to do myself often. Keep them cumming.
Sure wish you would Finish this it seems like a 4 some +
Moms Friends want him to do them and You Leave us Hanging.
Does he get Sister Pregnant?
What about Rachel does she become Pregnant?
How long do they stay together and after the "Break up"
Does he stay with Sis,Kelly or Kelly and Rachel?
Is there a chapter 9? OMG all that pussy to fuck. Can't wait for Sam to stsrt fucking Rachels friends.
Great series from start to finish. Your descriptions of all that hot fucking are amazing.
Great don't stop this story , just as it's getting more exciting , I can't wait for CH 9 ,etc more fun between sister , her partner , her mother, ,and the tired exhausted Brother .
Keep gouny
Wow to bang your sister and her lover....and they both want to get pregnant....darn the rotten luck....i have two sisters I would not have minded doing that too....missed my chance...and I think once munched carpet from time to time
YOU HAD A GOOD STORY GOING ON HERE, AND JUST AS IT STARTED TO INTEREST ME YOU STOP. I TAKE BACK MY RATINGS AND GIVE IT AN INCOMPLETE.
you could write 50 chapters on this story and each one would be as hot as the last. A writer of that stature is quite rare here on Lit.
I wouldn't be surprised if you had quit because of a higher paid venue. In any case, thanks for the ride.....
Very much how you write Rachel ibto the trio's lives.
Looking forward to reading more development of Rachel and Sam.
Possibly Tachel makes a pitch that Sam should move in with her.