All Comments on 'Two for One Ch. 08'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
husband

great story... keep it up!! but i thought rachel had divorced from her husband?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great

really good storys, keep it up. i cant wait for ch. 09

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow

i really enjoyed your story and hope to continue reading it,should you write any more chapters....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
The Best

I just read the entire series, so far. PLEASE, DON'T STOP NOW!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
CUM ON

I love what i've read so far. I REALLY hope to read ch. 09 before to long.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Hot Series - keep it going

you need to do mother and dughter at the same time - that's always been a fantasy of mine

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
please continue this story

great story line please keep the story going

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story

please write some more...... it's great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
screwed up again

you screwed up again in chapter 6 you say kellys mom and dad got divorced but in chapter 8 you say kellys dad died which is it and try to keep your story straight it makes it very confusing when you keep changing the facts from chapter to chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great read

Who cares if the hubby died after the divorce. This is a great series. I just read it all today and can't wait till chapter 9.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
too turned on to care

The fact that he died or the fact they divorced really didn't matter to me. I write often and usually pick up on things like that, but I was too turned on to care. I was disappointed to see it stopped after this story. Please write more! You are so great, ill always ask you to write more. By the way, are you single? Hehe.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
too turned on to care

The fact that he died or the fact they divorced really didn't matter to me. I write often and usually pick up on things like that, but I was too turned on to care. I was disappointed to see it stopped after this story. Please write more! You are so great, ill always ask you to write more. By the way, are you single? Hehe.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Awesome

This story so far is great. When is the next chapter going to cum out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Major Turn on

Wow that was a great story. I read the whole thing today and had to do myself often. Keep them cumming.

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Great Series

Sure wish you would Finish this it seems like a 4 some +

Moms Friends want him to do them and You Leave us Hanging.

Does he get Sister Pregnant?

What about Rachel does she become Pregnant?

How long do they stay together and after the "Break up"

Does he stay with Sis,Kelly or Kelly and Rachel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dont leave us hanging

More please great series

GizmorGizmorover 13 years ago
Great Start

Hot story! Let's have the rest?

Lmastera1943Lmastera1943over 12 years ago
Hot women

Is there a chapter 9? OMG all that pussy to fuck. Can't wait for Sam to stsrt fucking Rachels friends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Can't wait to see both sandra and rachel pregnant...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great Story

Please continue this tale it's been an awesome read

TavernerTavernerover 8 years ago
Great series

Great series from start to finish. Your descriptions of all that hot fucking are amazing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Two for 1 ,

Great don't stop this story , just as it's getting more exciting , I can't wait for CH 9 ,etc more fun between sister , her partner , her mother, ,and the tired exhausted Brother .

Keep gouny

bimale63bimale63over 8 years ago

Great read next chapter soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More

I would love to read more please !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wow to bang your sister and her lover....and they both want to get pregnant....darn the rotten luck....i have two sisters I would not have minded doing that too....missed my chance...and I think once munched carpet from time to time

SAV12SAV12over 4 years ago
WHY DID YOU STOP HERE?

YOU HAD A GOOD STORY GOING ON HERE, AND JUST AS IT STARTED TO INTEREST ME YOU STOP. I TAKE BACK MY RATINGS AND GIVE IT AN INCOMPLETE.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
I Think....

you could write 50 chapters on this story and each one would be as hot as the last. A writer of that stature is quite rare here on Lit.

I wouldn't be surprised if you had quit because of a higher paid venue. In any case, thanks for the ride.....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very much how you write Rachel ibto the trio's lives.

Looking forward to reading more development of Rachel and Sam.

Possibly Tachel makes a pitch that Sam should move in with her.

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