All Comments on 'Two Friends in Need Ch. 04'

by MasterBeau

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Welcome Back

I love this series. I first found this site and your work last year and was really disappointed when I read the three chapters and discovered the series was incomplete with no ending in sight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
just one caveat

I do like your style, but the spelling errors break the flow.

ffgamerffgamerover 14 years ago
brilliant

This series is great and i seriously would like to see more of it

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Incredible

Thank you for writing what you have in this series, I would love to see more of it though, I hope in the future you return to finishing it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
So hot!

Brilliant! Loving it!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

hope theres more to come

22eyefull1122eyefull11almost 9 years ago
one great story

I have always wondered why some writers just stop writing, I can understand if they have no talent, but your writing is excellent.

This story is half finished. I see it took you 5 years to write 1/2 of this story and you have not wrote a word in 7 years maybe if you ever read this comment you could explain to future readers why you quit? Thank you for the half you did write.

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