by HotSexyWords
the action was good, however the narration was strange. It seemed a little rudementary.
Great story. Kept my cock hard while reading about her getting fucked in all three holes and swallowing all that cum.
Hot story. I enjoyed it immensely. ^.^ I came so hard. Can't wait to go work off this energy. Hahaha. I needed a good morning orgasm, and this hit the spot perfectly. ^.-
Not a bad story. One thing though...how does one have a "girlish" pussy. As opposed to what? a masculine one? That aside it was a pretty good story, I love a good DP story myself. Although there were some points where it felt a bit choppy like you were reading a story rather then becoming imursed (sp?) in it
..in civilised countries the game you Americans call basketball is called netball and is strictly for girlies. What kind of wimps are these two?
oh my fucking god!
that was a gooood thing you should write what happens when she gets home though
keep writng
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Loved the story, it makes me wanna order a pizza and ask for a delivery girl
more stories please, the way u write got my pussy fucking wet juz by reading.
I came three times while reading this! It was extremely hot! Keep writing, I think you are great!