All Comments on 'Two Halves, One Soul'

one of the very best on the site. looking forward to reading he last half. hope there will be many more like this

Holy crap! I loved this story. It had heart, heat, substance, and soul. Pardon the alliteration, but your story was amazing. Terrific piece! ~lady no name

I am just anxiously awaiting the second part of this story. Thank you for sharing your tallent with us.

You have a propensity for writing. Thank you for sharing your literary talents with the masses. I can't wait to read more from you. Good luck in all your endeavors, writing or otherwise.

Hey, this is the best story i've read so far! Not just focusing on sex like others but you put in emotions and feelings. Great job done! Do write more. :)

Living in the Chicagoland area, this was like reading about people I knew. Simply Wonderful!

i loved your story, it was really good, and a fun read for 4am!

This is my perhaps 4th time reading this and i've read all your stories more than once. I wish there are new stories though. Please do write more. They are really great.

omg got me so excited while reading it.. i love it had me and my girlfriend going at it right after the sex scences!!!

This is like th 12th time I've read your stuff. I think that you are the best writer here. Thank you for publishing your stuff here. I hope to see new stuff from you soon!!

A beautifully crafted story I love it

i really enjoyed this story!!!

Fantastic story- beautifully worded, great plot, adorable characters...made me laugh, cry and twitch with excitement all at once! :)

this is the best story i've ever read. instead of hurrying through you took your time. you made the characters have a bond instead of a fling. we watched them fall in love and go on. it's the best thing since sliced bread. i'll be waiting for the sequel to this.

want wait for the next part!

This was a great story. When is Chapter 2 coming out? I can't wait to read it.

@Becky7

Chapter two is called "But Now One Soul"

It's just as great, if not better!

I love the story. The romance is fantastic...I can even live with the mental telepathy, since it seems intrinsic to the relationship, but, Littleton, Colorado is a suburb of Denver, it isn't in the country, and the Garden of the Gods is a park dedicated to natural stone formations, not primarily flora or fauna. Sorry, but as a Coloradoan those little gaffs were slightly irritating. Otherwise though, great tale.

I Believe That True Love Finds Two Persons And

Brings Them Together As Lifetime Soul Mates.

Though I Am Still Seeking That Love Of My Life

I Loved This & Will Read Chapter 2 A.S.A.P.

wonderful.

Enjoyed every word! Now on to Part 2.

I love this story, thank you for writing it.

Great flowing story, I feel I really got to know the characters. Can't wait for more !!! :)

I would guess by now that part 2 is not forthcoming. It really is a shame, it actually was a very good story. I do believe that they remained together in the end.

I have just finished this and actually all of your stories!!! Found them all intense and amazing! I see you have not written anything recently, hope to see more from you! Thank you for the pleasure of reading them!

What an amazing story, it was well paced, well written, excellent character development, conflict, action, good sex - all the elements for good erotica. I would love to see a continuation of this story, but Alex the Cat, your posting on the site is sporadic and in most cases span years, so maybe it's too much to expect another one any time soon. I hope the positive comments and requests you've receive from many readers will motivate you to write more. Thanks for the lovely read

So well written! Love prevails throughout with heart warming details!

I hope one day you'll return and complete part 2...

Thank you,

L

Hey,

I know this can stand alone in itself... where is the part 2??? Am curious how arty copes and get spoiled... ofcourse Jesse and Dani

Thats part two :)

I hate one pup didn't make it. But great story. And the sex went more in to dominate and submissive than I would like. But otherwise it is a reread type story. The for sharing the story.

You are so good at this. Really, I’ve read almost all one next to the other and its so gooooood. Just close the eyes and everything is perfect. Une big thank you and a hug from afar

A enchanting lovely story ...... May a bit much of,violence for my taste, but yeah this could truly happen and some events, happenings would enlighten the reader if you described them further more intense more detailed ....... But great artwork , thank you

And 10 stars ...... Unfortunately im not able to use the "rate the story" star buttons ....... 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Nice tale, but 54 years old id elderly?????

32 inch wheels? Wow, a Nissan Pathfinder monster truck! ;-)

Good story. Curious how the telepathy will work out.

I really hope you meant 32 inch tires. Just teasing, but as a car person I had to mention it. 😁

Wonderful story, and I can't wait to read part 2!

A good story, looking forward to the sequel!

Really happy that you are writing multiple chapter stories! So many of your tales have the potential to be made bigger/expanded.

Thank you for your stories!