All Comments on 'Two Hearts'

I'm at a complete loss for words here really - I loved the storyline, loved the dialogue, loved the outcome. This is my favourite one yet, and I'm looking forward to reading more from you in the future!

Jennifer

I would have to agree with Jenn and say this is your best story thus far. Your descriptiveness, your character development, and your ability to create a relatable situation is amazing! I loved that you threw in the interaction between the brothers, and of course your interaction between the main characters was great! I can only hope there will be a part 2! Hugs hun

This is superb, just superb. The writing flows rythmically, ebbing and flowing and engrossing the reader. The use of dialogue is spot on and beautifully descriptive. Off to read more of your stories. Bravo Hocky, Bravo

I loved the dating service angle you went in. It was very sweet. I loved the developement of the characters and the way you wrote them. Very Hot Stuff!!!!!

NOT a "Romance" story, lose a star 4*'s

Two Hearts is a beautifully written Romance story from start to finish: sweet, tender, passionate, loving, which is why the classification of this story is quite correct. (The erotic element does not disqualify it from being an excellent romance story). The story has excellent characters and a plot that is neither took brisk nor too slow. The problem with this story is that it is just too short. Perhaps a sequel will be written. Five stars.