All Comments on 'Two Hundred Dollars Ch. 19'

I look for these stories almost every day. Love the characters and their mutual Discovery. And there's so much debt left. Wonderful

Cant help loving this story! Feels like a long wait for every episode, although in actual time it is not. Thanks for this and your other stories. Nice work! :)

Lovely. :)

I already liked the games and this is a new level.

Maybe a personal thing is that I like the spanking more than the paddling. It feels more personal. But surely a funny gift :D

Another great chapter. I love this story - thanks for sharing it with us.

I can just about imagine how HOT those butts look!!!!

You are doing great to draw Laura into her dark side. .. That little preacher in head must give her hell in 20 of 21. Naughty girl!

xtorch, this is longest teasing that I have read so far.

19 chapters, 3 young people, all high on adrenaline and emotions, sometimes drunk and uninhibited but no penetrating sex. Yet!

But now I feel something new has stepped in, since in the last lines Bailey opened her heart to Kent. That's unprecedented in this extent.

It hadn't really occurred to me to think of the strip search as a game until I started writing it, but it worked out nicely.

I agree about the spatula, and I think the three characters do, too. It's neat, and different, but this starting out as a spanking arrangement and that's where they've maintained their addictions.

And they all seem to agree they don't need penetration at this point. Especially Laura, who's nowhere near.

Thank you all for your kind words. It's comments and followers that keep me motivated to write.

Cheers,

@XavierTorch

Thanks for sharing your story, enjoying it so far, especially the exploration of impact toys. A found wooden dowel or branch would be a good chapter. Seems like you are trying to rush the payoff for the end of the fall semester. Are you planning to have them live happily ever after? Will they profess their love (they're obviously in love)? I would think they would like to relocate to an apartment of their own after semester break. Again, thanks, I'm enjoying your work. Demetri

Keep going. These stories are great.

This is the best chapter yet! Keep going!

It’s such a shame that so many people seem to start their sexual adventures so horribly repressed. If sex was openly accepted that there’d be a lot less risk taking. In this situation they’re all fine it’s the epitome of Safe, Sane and Consensual.

Soon though that debt is going to be paid off and what risks will they take to carry on exploring these acts?

Love the story, it’s really well written, realistic and relatable. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Tess

There's a certain magic in the energy released when someone overcomes his or her own sexually repression. It's not something another person can do for you, but other people can lead by the way of good example. Laura has an example in Bailey, of someone who isn't hurting anyone, but is doing things Laura wouldn't otherwise do.

In the other sense, though, repression does often lead to poor sexual decision making, fear of asking questions, seeking medical help etc.

I'm just going to continue exploring the good side.

I love this story. No clue what’s gonna happen between them, and I’m annoyed when I have to put my phone down and stop reading. This is great.