All Comments on 'Two Little Girls'

Love is such a gift, isn't it? Your characters were so believable and natural and-- so wonderful! I fell in love with both of them. So, I suppose I'm your number one fan on this one! Um, I'm a guy.

Now this is not my usual kind of story. Well written sweet and hot. I hope you do nasty as well.

I could relate to the quiet, reserved characters very well and this story is written with much better English as well as poise compared to many other submissions. Excellent work.

Thats life

Very enjoyable. Sweet. Easy to ready. Well written. I did NOT like the end though. Finding out that years later they don't end up together, tore my heart out.

So the lesbian married a man and the not a lesbian has a girlfriend?how fucked up can you make the end

I mean it makes a certain amount of sense that the person who is just experimenting and trying to figure out what she’s into would be less likely to freak out then someone who immediately realizes that they are gay.

And Adrienne could be bi and just found a guy that fit with her I would hardly call her a lesbian, or closeted since she seems somewhat open with the fact the she has some interest in Women.