All Comments on 'Two Sides to the Coin'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A nice switch

This could easily been old hat. Instead you pulled a switch that had me from the beginning. Thanks for a story that made me want to read to the finish.

LeaforfunLeaforfunover 12 years ago
Please continue

I very much enjoyed the story and hope you will write a second chapter. It would be interesting to see how her journey continues.

john1946john1946over 12 years ago
Fun

A fun story. I would certainly enjoy your thoughts on how this continues

Luvlee11Luvlee11over 12 years ago
Great Story

Please continue... This is a great direction for a story

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 12 years ago
More!

Very well done, fw - a marvellous story, well deserving the five stars I awarded it - you really ought to continue with these characters!

Really good - I enjoyed it enormously - thank you.

sinfully_hevanlysinfully_hevanlyover 12 years ago
Well Done!

FW,

You are definitely on the right track. I love the way you changed her trajectory. In a coin toss, will she forever choose "tails?"

Delish!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Beautifully written. Explored the emotions of the participants. Explicitly erotic.

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