by fantasywriter
This could easily been old hat. Instead you pulled a switch that had me from the beginning. Thanks for a story that made me want to read to the finish.
I very much enjoyed the story and hope you will write a second chapter. It would be interesting to see how her journey continues.
A fun story. I would certainly enjoy your thoughts on how this continues
Very well done, fw - a marvellous story, well deserving the five stars I awarded it - you really ought to continue with these characters!
Really good - I enjoyed it enormously - thank you.
FW,
You are definitely on the right track. I love the way you changed her trajectory. In a coin toss, will she forever choose "tails?"
Delish!
Beautifully written. Explored the emotions of the participants. Explicitly erotic.