All Comments on 'Two Weeks with Katie'

...the nipple clamps and paddle on page 3,

I quit reading.

Do not really care for anal either

(although I've read Literotica for so long, I've kinda gotten used to putting up with it in non-Anal stories).

It was especially unrealistic during Katie's first time (in the prequel Her First Time).

Writing is good, and I like the storyline (girlfriend's hot daughter),

but finally too many quirks that were not my quirks.

Paul in Oklahoma

You.

Your.

You're.

i love it! keep writing. and i'll keep reading. ;)

The story was doing well and then it became a total wreck when anal sex was added. Damn why do so many authors now believe NO story is complete or written unless they include anal sex, they must live in a sewer to have that mind-set.