All Comments on 'Two Worlds Ch. 09'

Why did you kill her?! I wanted her and chareles to mate. He actually loved her, I just thought he was playing hard to get. This story made me cry, it was so sad

I don't know what to say about this chapter it made me cry

I have enjoyed this story and am looking forward to the new story. I don't think the princess is truly dead, at least I hope not. Her and Charles will get together and live happily ever after. As for the new storyline, it already sounds interesting and I will be watching for it. Thanks for sharing this story w/me!

I am screaming right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please tell me shes not dead I wanted to see her happy. I hope the next stories just as great as this one T.T poor unari

Grrrrrrrr

I can't believe you left us at this horrible cliffhanger!!! Your story is magnificent and I loved reading it so far.....please post the Two Worlds: Land of Ice story soon!!!! :)

That was excellent but I'm going to be disgusted if MizT is right again. Have some balls and something bad happen. Be a rebel.

you killed unari you monster. how could you kill this poor little girl she didn't deserve to die she deserved to find love. i wanted her to be able to keep her mate and life. also you could find a way to bring her back to life because when you killed her it was like i had just been stabbed in the heart. since nekos are like cats and cats have nine lives... you could find a way to make Unari live again i do not want her to be really dead *sob* *sob* *sob* I will truly hate you if you dont bring her back. p.s. still is a great story i was one of the anonymous on last chapters.

correction to my last comment title. also the story made me cry and i am a guy and no i am not gay or anything close to a girl. no offense to either party. and no sexism intended. just removing stereotypes for incult people

CONTINUE! NOW! OR I SPEAR YOU!

Impressive ending.

I have spent the day reading this and couldn't stop so im finally getting to comment. Soon as I did the math I knew this wouldn't end well but wow!! All I can say is I'm glad you've already started on the next one because you probably would have been able to hear the amount of cursing from me otherwise.

That being said you are a very talented writer I am loving this concept and very much enjoying your story. Looking forward to reading more.

That SHIT IS MESSED UP! First of all, LITEROTICA and the readers should understand that in this genre...sci-fi/fantasy...and in another culture, society or universe...sexuality and age is what it is! FUCK! Another thing,....THIS SHIT IS MESSED UP! I mean....another damn storyline? FUCK! Your damn universe and I'm Peeping Tom and I'm now DAMN sorry I passed through! This shit is messed up..

Why is it so wrong for people older than eighteen to be with younger people? I mean I am only 18 and my girl-friend is over three hundred years old. Yes I do mean three hundred for those of you who wonder.

It's their story not yours if you don't like it don't slam it. Read another story.

I just had to stop and comment. Great story! Love it! Moving on to part two.

The series gets good and you do this to that sweet girl I hope she lives or I wont like it she needs to be happy why throw that in you build up the love then break her neck GRRRRRRRRRRRRRR she sounds like my god daughter.

You are more evil than I am with the endings of my stories. I have to admit I didn't see that coming whatsoever. I was honestly expecting him to leave and come back in the second story. Hated that she died but you did an excellent job with that twist.

WOW

Soooo do we hate Charles? I mean he killed his mate and exposed them