All Comments on 'TxQ - Helpless Hannah'

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Really well done on this one.

Enjoyed it immensly.

Not up to your usual standards. Not worth the read

Well played sir. Well played indeed.

Very hot story, just sucks you right in.

This Hitchcockian gang rape was horny as hell and got hornier yet the author kept us plugged into the horror rage fear and all associated emotions of the victim step by step by step. The sex was hard sex and taboo and heated and then surprise. The author is relentless with obscuring the readers cognition of the events blindfolded with the same view of the action as our blindfolded victim. The scenes are totally wicked and relentless subduing our nonconsenting rape victim yet her body caves inti the rage of sexual arousal.The author smacks us to the reality of what was really happening and puts us into throughway of pondering the usefulness of fulfilling fantasies and the pillaging of trust in a loving relationship. The reader doesn't get off easy, the author let me fall into a pit of concern. Shame on you author.

5 stars!

They won't make it to the anniversary. I wonder how many diseases they'll have in a couple of weeks? This marriage is a 50 car pileup looking to happen. They deserve the divorce.

You're an idiot!!! It's a fantasy. Nothing more. If you don't enjoy it then don't read it

They are not married. She calls him "boyfriend" through out.

I was sucked in.

Hannah forgave him. So, all's OK. He just gave her what she really wanted.

5*****

You're better than to write about rape and gangbangs

Thanks for sharing.

Exquisitely Written , story got a bit Nasty for me in the middle ,

& was happily shocked out of the Dark places the story

was going, when the blindfold was removed

from HannahBanana.

Great storys drag you into them , make you feel the emotions ,

Leap from the page & into your Brain.

make you lose track of time.

well , the Author does that in spades with this little tale ..

p.s

Authors also know they done good from the negative comments & feedback.

anyone who takes the time to comment has been really moved by the story.

& as far as Authors are concerned, well thats Mission Accomplished.

Great story, wouldn't have minded about where it was going, but I like it even better how it actually turned out. You have a gift and I'm glad you're sharing it. The PeeWee thing made me laugh

Did Alex talk to Megan:

"Hey, Hannah and my anniversary (for what?) is coming up... Any idea what she might really like...? Had she told you anything...?"

"Well, now that you ask, Alex, she does have this fantasy... Not sure how you'd go about fulfilling it though..."

Or did he come up with this on the fly when she "joked" about bringing someone else in:

"Hey, Megan... I was... um... wondering if you could help me fulfill a fantasy of Hannah's...?"

"What kind of fantasy?"

"Well, it would involve multiple 'guys'... but I really don't want to SHARE her with some other guy, you know... Any ideas...?"

"Well Alex, I could help you... Because I'VE this fantasy too that you could help ME with..."

Either way, well played on his part...

"Fake Pablo" doesn't explain the garlic breath!

that was easy to explain, he left her tied up for how long and could easily have consumed garlic something in that time frame...

great story as always TX

I really liked it.

Based somewhat on the way you write, I thought that after they removed the blindfold, they might REALLY treat her to the "open door" experience!! Could be rather interesting?!

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

The category would be nonconsent/reluctance maybe. But it's the strangest rape story I've ever read. It was a good joke on Hannah as well as us.