All Comments on 'Ugly Duckling (Ribbons) Ch. 03'

this is a disappointment after the great build up of the first two chapters.

Chapter One was my favorite with great conflict, which produced a wide range of emotions, but I didn't find this to be a disappointment. I think your writing is so good and descriptions so fresh that I can actually feel what Rachel and Kira are feeling and it's very sexy, which is one of the goals of this site. I loved how Rachel experimented and became adept at pleasing Kira and thought it was very well written.

Hi again, this story was great. I agree with other comments that the 1st one was the best.

That was a beautiful girly moment. Wish at times I was a girl myself

This is such a wonderful story, I so hope it works out well for them, they are so young, and you never know what will happen.

This was a super cute story<3

It just keeps getting better! thank you for sharing it with us!

Ooh so naughty this chapter was. Sexy.