All Comments on 'Uh-Oh'

Pretty good story. A few parts were a bit repetitive and the storytelling was a little jumbled in a few spots but it's a good start.

So will they discover the mistaken deliveries, or is this the end?

Thanks for asking if the mixup will be discovered in a followup story. Since this is a Valentine's Day story and VD is for happy endings, no I don't think they'll discover the truth. I think they'll be happy with what they wound up with.

Everybody, who matters, is happy. Toss whiny and expected expectations, fuck grateful and flexible.

the part when he went back to the candy story. The dynamic between the man and the clerk was hot.

Cute

Mix-up are not always bad :-) In this case everyone got what they deserved.

A gift was bought for Sara, and another for Chip. Both were expensive boxes of chocolates, one box included car keys for Chip. Then uh-oh, the boxes were delivered to the wrong people. Chip received Sara'a candy, and Kyle received Chips candy with the car keys. One big question looms, how did Kyle get Sara's candy?! Alex only though of buying Kyle a gift, the candy was bought for, and ordered to be delivered to Sara. Therefor uh-oh would mean Chip got just a box of candy, Sara got the camaro, and Kyle got bupkis cause Alex never followed through with buying his gift. This story is a silly waste of time.

they got what they wanted and more

Just great, KeithD! Fantastic ending, absolutely fantastic ...

OMG how hilarious that Alex's lover got the camero!!