All Comments on 'Ultimate Line'

I started reading this without realizing it is a vampire story. Normally, I don't care much for them, and stop reading when I realize the story is in that genre. I finished reading this entry, finding it surprisingly interesting. It's very well written, especially for a first effort.

Five.

i'm very intrigued by whats to come

I like the gold flecks in the eyes, as I use those for the Vampyri characters in my tales. Excellent first chapter, and I can't wait for more! 5 stars. :)

Love Simone and Baron!!

Baron is such a geek, everything he does and think is scientific related.

I didn't know it was a vampire story. I'm not into that genre too much but you've caught my attention!

Good story I'm intrigued. Michigan, Consruction, or Cartels?

look foward to more

confused did she get stuck by the thorn and then get sick for 2wks or was she sick the got stuck?

Can somebody explain to me what's going. And I love vampire love stories. But for some reason I'm lost ass hell. Lol. It's a good story. But my slow ass just lost. Lol. So can somebody be nice enough to help me out. Lol

This one is a bit too cerebral for my taste. I enjoyed it, but I was a bit lost during parts of it, also. My vampire tales are a bit simpler, to be honest. It's what I prefer. :)