All Comments on 'Uncle Albert'

Why so short? It would have been even better if he fucked her too.

A really quick read. Thanks

who said she WON'T fuck him? Lots of room to work with this tale. :)

"We're so sorry, Uncle Albert ..." Sorry we didn't fuck you when we had the chance! Please tell me there is going to be more! Ride, Captain, Ride!

For such a short compact story there is really good charachter development within the tale. For Susan, Uncle Albert is a figure of fun, someone to be embarassed to be with. Then, as the story progresses, he adopts a tutor type role, until at the end she desires his company. Also a nice flip in the dominance of the charachters with Susan initiallating the sex, and Uncle Albert in a submissive role, then the scene ending with him firmly in charge. Combined with good POV and descripive writing this is a great little story.

Short and to the point, that's a good Niece wish I had one of those.