All Comments on 'Under Cover Of Darkness Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
sweet ii

you do not disappoint... even better than the first... hope there is more =)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
hottttttttt!

I'm ready for the next part! You've got me 'hanging & hot'! fyi: I am female, and this story is very exciting!

SvenskaflickaSvenskaflickaover 18 years ago
You're torturing your readers!

I want part 3 NOOOOOOOOOOW!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wow

I love this story because of the sweetness of the first time. i think however, that the sweetness was depleted when he asked to put it up his ass.

Still a wonderful story, cant wait for part 3.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
deflowering

reminds me of the time when my friend allen deflowered me , it was so awesome, and the best part was feeling him pump his cum deep inside me......that was b-4 AIDS of course

Bookie1979Bookie1979over 17 years ago
Hottt oh so hot

When will the next part come out. You made me very hot with just the first 2 parts, please write the next one soon.-Bookietwo

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
oh man

god dang hurry and do a third! that's really hot!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
wish it was me

This is a beautiful story. Reading it has made me realize how ready I am to be deflowered.

cutandhornycutandhornyabout 17 years ago
Wondering ...

I'm now wondering if this is going to be a one-way affair, or if both Jon and Dan are going to get some sexual stuff going ...

PS_LopezPS_Lopezalmost 16 years ago
About the Vaseline

Don't bother bringing out a condom. Vaseline dissolves latex, it'd be just as bad as without a condom. A water-soluble lubricant like KY should be used. If you don't have KY in your area, research water-soluble lubricants.

This is a good story so far. I'm adding it to my favorites so I can follow it. Continue writing; you have some potential here. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Please finish this

This is a good start. When are you going to finish this story?

LovebiandincestLovebiandincestover 2 years ago

Great story. Want more. Got me rock hard. Especially the Vaseline. Brought back some fond memories when I let a friend fuck my ass using it.

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