by Amelia_Peach
you do not disappoint... even better than the first... hope there is more =)
I'm ready for the next part! You've got me 'hanging & hot'! fyi: I am female, and this story is very exciting!
I love this story because of the sweetness of the first time. i think however, that the sweetness was depleted when he asked to put it up his ass.
Still a wonderful story, cant wait for part 3.
reminds me of the time when my friend allen deflowered me , it was so awesome, and the best part was feeling him pump his cum deep inside me......that was b-4 AIDS of course
When will the next part come out. You made me very hot with just the first 2 parts, please write the next one soon.-Bookietwo
This is a beautiful story. Reading it has made me realize how ready I am to be deflowered.
I'm now wondering if this is going to be a one-way affair, or if both Jon and Dan are going to get some sexual stuff going ...
Don't bother bringing out a condom. Vaseline dissolves latex, it'd be just as bad as without a condom. A water-soluble lubricant like KY should be used. If you don't have KY in your area, research water-soluble lubricants.
This is a good story so far. I'm adding it to my favorites so I can follow it. Continue writing; you have some potential here. :)
This is a good start. When are you going to finish this story?
Great story. Want more. Got me rock hard. Especially the Vaseline. Brought back some fond memories when I let a friend fuck my ass using it.