All Comments on 'Under Their Spell'

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TornadoTysTornadoTysabout 10 years ago
Potential Fall Out

Though this story is about a wife's submission to a dominant sexual individual. She has actually cheated on her husband who knows nothing of her desire or act of infidelity.

For the wife to move forward she needs to approach the subject with her husband. In this this there is no insight or expansion of his character.

If the wife tries to find a couple nearer home she runs the risk of being caught by her friends, family, colleagues of of course her husband.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
great story of secret desires realized

I loved it because it skipped all the hang ups that this woman (many women) have ( nudity, pain, Cum-eating, girl girl) and focuses on her getting pleasure from her devotion to please others. I do wish there was more description of Jackie's face and body but I really enjoyed this story.

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Writing has slowed somewhat due to other 'life' matters. I am pleased that others continue to enjoy my stories. If you want professional quality writing, perhaps you ought to find a site where you can pay for that. I tend to ignore critiques or 'helpful suggestions' from 'ano...