All Comments on 'Unexpected Encouter'

I liked it a lot... thanks.

Not sure why the 'dom sub' line got in.....

Lukas

Highly readable, absorbing, and made me want to play with myself. In need of a part 2, to explore the D/s line!

-- sulk

I found this just a bit hard to read.I did enjoy the story line, but I noticed a few run on sentences that were hard to digest.

I was to meet her in the very early evening of a Friday. She didn't want to give a description of herself but did take note of mine. The 20 year age difference, me being the elder, didn't bother her. To make certain it was me I told her I'd be carrying a best seller and gave her the name.

fun_in_the_sun411@yahoo.com

Not normally into uncle/niece pairings but i liked this one. Would like to see you continue it with the d/s issue. That would be a nice follow up. good work.

<a href="http://sudokus.freetzi.com/index.html">nafitha</a>

Loved it! short sweet, to the point and didn't waste time with nonsense!