All Comments on 'Unexpected Find'

Story line was good, conversation a bit stilted. Some word use issues could be solved with an editor. Was is Shelly, Shauna, or Susie? I'd like to read more about this trio. Since it was your first effort I'll give if a 5. Thanks for the work it takes to write a story of this length. I'd be glad to beta read or edit for you.

That was quite possibly the best story on Literotica I have ever read. Loved the dialogue and the whole time I was wishing I'd had an experience like that. Please, keep writing.

Wow! I loved that story. I happen to have a date with two lovely escorts in a few days and if our time together is a fourth of what your story said I'll be an incredibly happy man. Thanks for getting me hard.

writing. Don't know where you learned it, but it shows up a lot on Brit stories. It's a real turn-off to me when reading. Use some imagination for another way to describe parts of her body.