by Whisky7up
great story line with the twist at the end!
Thanks for a real story properly thought out and written.
This was really a good tale...well crafted. Erotic too.
I imagine it was quite hard to write and not ummmm.....lol....I can't 'spoil' the plot can I.
Just read it, people :)
I have visited this site for a year now and never felt compelled to comment until now. Kudos! Very well written and I love the ending! I will have to look for more from the author!
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