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Click hereI felt like a load had been lifted off me and I hoped I didn't sound too relieved when I said, "That's great. Really, I mean it. I want you to be happy, Gwen."
"But if I'm with someone else, I don't think I should be with you."
"I know and I understand. Remember, we talked about this and agree we couldn't hold each other back."
"I'm glad you're not upset. I don't know if I would have handled it so well if you told me you were with someone else."
And I'm not going to tell you, I thought. "Your happiness is most important, Gwen. I love you."
"I love you too, big brother."
So I got out of it without ever telling Mom or Gwen about each other. While Gwen was home for the summer we kept things on the down low, although fortunately she spent a lot of time flying out to see her new boyfriend. Mom and I went on that vacation in the islands and it was so nice to be able to be out and not hide what was going on. I even convinced Mom to go topless on the beach!
In the end Dad got what he wanted, to much more of an extent than he ever could have dreamed. I'd taken my place at the head of the company and at the head of the family. I even took my father's place in his bed. And I learned to accept my destiny and not run away from it. I would have never guessed it when I first came back home, but everyone turned out happy and I hoped that somewhere, somehow my father could accept what happened and be content that everything was taken care of.
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Good story, but now for the speed bumps. "The rough and ready Marine has been replaced by Donald Trump." (God, I hope not!) - The segue between Tony and his mom was such a slow tease I was almost tempted to skip ahead until 'IT' finally happened - Thank God he didn't call her the puerile 'mommy' but kept to the adult form of 'mom' - Was a little disappointed that you copped out with Gwen and didn't have continue with the plot . . . .
@tiercenpt
It's because the author got lazy. Starts a story, doesn't finish it before starting a new one. And so in the process of finishing the earlier story, everything gets cut short. Lack of creativity to bring it to a more conclusive end.
You can tell that the author lacks imagination since to exude the sexuality of the characters, they are just painted as slaves to desire.
Stupid.
Wow, Great story and the characters were spot on. There were a few hiccups in the writing, but still a wonderful read .5🌟
5 full chums. The only thing lacking is Kitty fucking her tennis pro and being caught by Tony.
I like this chapter because I enjoy a good mother/son story but the first part was better in my opinion. The story was good and even from the beginning of the first part you could sense what was coming between Kitty and Tony but the wrap up seemed rushed. Overall I think both parts are 5 stars.
this is now my second read of the story in search of another story (which was almost the same as this one) I've read before and can't seem to find anymore.
now I think you should've leftit at part one and made it just a tad longer and skipping pretty much the entirety of part two here.
could've wrote like. dad now in coma, son head of business and family a longer paragraph where he fucks his mom. then how they lead the business as a trio or duo bro/sis.
what's confusing for the story is. and here I have to agree with c4vetteman94.
the story started out all about the sister, some "honorable" mentions about the mom but it was mainly about sis and bro.
now in part two out of the events those two caused. you basically just deleted one character, the sister and added the mom for some reason when she was before just an honorable mention. if she was in part1 a little more on the "naughty" side, when they were in the Jacuzzi and so.
I mean the part about him and the mom is hot as fuck, don't get me wrong, but in the overall story I don't see it fitting now. A standalone story for them would've been better I think
Brother and sister should have been the pair to stay together. Why would you write about a disloyal sister and brother after the way they acted towards each other in the first chapter and then after they got back together at spring break in this chapter. Mom should have never have been an option for him with his sister around. Shameful. I seem to be on a roll reading stories with bad endings recently.