by harrypotter_rod
its was simply mind blowing.... waiting for the next part eagerly.
The story was good but the fact that the authors english was pathetic was a real let down. Learn better english and write it again!
This is a nice story. If she is not yet satisfied, then there are others to satisfy her, in as many ways s she wants!
BRAVO BRAVO PLEASE WRITE THE STORIES PART BY PART
MRS KUNDAN GPARAKH
She would need to pay me back for my earlier oral work on her snatch, but would she let me fuck her pussy, or would she only want to give me a blow-job? I wanted to fuck her, I wanted to hold her tightly as the head of my cock was hitting bottom. I wanted to make her moan, give her an orgasm, and make her want my cock again, and often.
This is a brilliant idea for a story, the title alone is awesome. Your English is a little broken and needs a little work as the mistakes throw the reader straight out of the story and into editor mode.
With a little more work on your English and an edit this story would be compelling I am sure.
All the best