by wordsinthedust
Just the right speed. Don't make her a slut. The pages of Literotica are strewn with slutty daughters. Keep her real, and this story could go in many interesting areas.
Too much time between chapters, with too little content. But I love the story.
I agree; don't make her a slut. This is slow moving and very hot. Me like.
It's soooo slow but so refreshing. One of the best family relationship stories I have read. You really have something going here so do take care. Thanks
These short chapters are as much a tease as a teenaged girl...