All Comments on 'Unleashed Desires, Ageless Passions'

by JonOwens

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rubysenrubysenalmost 17 years ago
Fabulous story

Excellent story, brilliant writing style and wondeful theme

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Nice and warm

Nice story. Chapter 2?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
great story, please have a chapter two.

Can't wait for chapter two

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Beautiful story!

Very well written. Great style, pace and erotic detail. A homage to the older woman! Is there a next installment? I do hope so. Keep writing.

QuillmanQuillmanalmost 17 years ago
Delightful...

... realistic, erotic! Just perfect. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Superb!

Great story, well-written. Erotic, sexy and passionate! I loved it. Can't wait for more outings of John and Rosie. Do keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great beginning!

I've just read all four chapters in reverse order. They are so good I'm going to go back and reread them now in sequence. This is quite an epic, JO! I just can't wait to see where you take this story. I really love the way you write. It's hot and sensual but your use of language is amazing! Thank you and let's have more.

wayback38wayback38almost 16 years ago
So hot...

..and so well-written. Gotta run, gotta dig into the next chapters.

Yobo36Yobo36over 10 years ago
Psychologist?

I find this hard to believe! Any "good" anal practitioner SHOULD know, you don't dip the wick from back to front. Serious infections can occur.

oldtwitoldtwit11 months ago

What a great story, great descriptions, good characters and a plot that I hope goes much further than it has so far, good read.

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