by JonOwens
Very well written. Great style, pace and erotic detail. A homage to the older woman! Is there a next installment? I do hope so. Keep writing.
Great story, well-written. Erotic, sexy and passionate! I loved it. Can't wait for more outings of John and Rosie. Do keep writing.
I've just read all four chapters in reverse order. They are so good I'm going to go back and reread them now in sequence. This is quite an epic, JO! I just can't wait to see where you take this story. I really love the way you write. It's hot and sensual but your use of language is amazing! Thank you and let's have more.
..and so well-written. Gotta run, gotta dig into the next chapters.
I find this hard to believe! Any "good" anal practitioner SHOULD know, you don't dip the wick from back to front. Serious infections can occur.
What a great story, great descriptions, good characters and a plot that I hope goes much further than it has so far, good read.