All Comments on 'Unusual Circumstances Ch. 01'

by Schaedelschaden

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Not a good choice for title

DanielKitten is already using this title. I'll probably go back and read your story but I really was expecting Daniel's. I hope you change the title of your submissions to something other than the one she is currently writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great first page

This needs a lot of work. Can't wait to read it if you put the time in.

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