All Comments on 'Unwanted Guest Ch. 03'

Not very erotic. Just midless rutting

Maybe you should take a look at your lack of morals instead of suggesting people with morals are wrong. Nobody in the world would like these people so maybe you should reevaluate your moral radar!?!?

That was gross.1* Go crawl back into your mothers basement

I didn't know I was in "Non-erotic". Imagine my surprise when I found this douchebag of a story. I'm not entirely certain if the author is writing situations as they could be or as he wants them to be. Rape? Incest? Group sex? What the fuck is wrong with the author? Is this how he thinks people really react to being raped? And if so, has e ever had sex before? With a woman? Who was still alive?

UNO ESTRELLA

Ummm very nice. What would happen next ?

Despite author's warning all faggots brought their ass here and when tom kolvig penetrated thier dirty holes they are now crying like anything :)

why they read such stories if they are sitting on high moral ground and why the hell these faggots visit literotica at all. they deserve pee on their faces.

Not very well written.

The story is a bit jerky and the dialogue doesn't flow very smoothly.

Perhaps the repeated use of the name Tom Kolvig over and over cause the disruption of the flow. It was used a lot, enough that I became tired of reading it.

With a little smoothing out, I think the story could be very good.

Thanks for the read.

continue the whole story

continue this story

Please continue the story

Please finish the story, it sounds like Tom's going to convince Betty's brother to fuck her too, against her will like he did!

i've did learn that i'm not only comment thee others i've also did notice

i'm not only comment around this .......... i've didn't read everything

this chapter only tad only bits\pieces ........ i've did notice that her brother

caught them i've did notice that the4th.the chapter got expected

about happening - never did literally happen W.T.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.F.H.

Folks, it's hot. Can't deny that. This theme is real in that fathers in law have lusted after daughters in law. And vice versa. Especially when FIL is more mature and not as needy as the son.

Author certainly isn't a native English speaker. That's ok but he needs an editor who is. That would make it read more smoothly.

I know many guys have fantasized about taking a woman against her will and fucking her into enjoying it. I'm not alone in this.

So accept it or not for real life, our fantasies dont have to follow reality, including morals.

When will it be continued

Ohhhhhh, I do hope you continue this story. Pretty interesting setup, can't wait to find out more about the father-in-law and his purpose for taking his daughter-in-law. Mmmmmm

" quickly she wore her clothes"??????????????

Can't figure out of this author is 8 years old or if the author has only been trying to learn English for the last 12 months

Worst story EVER!

Is this author alive?

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