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- Unwilling Ch. 07
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Yeah, he could have, but that would have ruined all the fun. Darwin knew he was acting strangely, different than before, but he hadn't been himself then. Hadn't been for a long time, too afraid of giving away his secrets and getting killed for it. He was still afraid, still acted guarded and unemotional most of the time, but the moments where his real self broke through the mental walls he had erected became more frequent with every day they were away from Banes.
He looked at Jared's face, scrunched with concentration on his task of toweling off Darwin like a toddler, and felt a hot wave of love and desire wash through his chest. The realization that this hot, sun-kissed jock was his, and only his, hit him with such a force it left him giddy and breathless.
His heart jumped, then raced with sudden excitement.
"Take me to bed, Jared."
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- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoI love the story. The action showed down some in this chapter which is actually a good thing. Just a minor linguistic detail. This is a story about American in the United States. We don't call parking lots car parks. LOL! I know that this is not your first language. But "car park" is a dead give away that someone might be more familiar with British English than American English. Anyway, that does not take away from the story. Truly excellent. And as someone else has said, it deserves to become a book. If you ever decide to turn it into one, I would suggest breaking up the intense action some for the sake of giving the reader a moment to catch their breath.
Anonymousover 9 years agoThis story would make an amazing book if you made it a little more cohesive and had a good editor. The story is absolutely amazing and I can't wait to read more!
tac_naynwafflesover 9 years agoWell that comment below was... -_-
Your story, your rules. We're just here to enjoy. Great story by the way :) I was slightly worried that you might have lost the momentum since you were gone for so long, but you're still going strong!
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymousover 9 years ago7 different chapters... an Darwin hasnt Yet to make Love to his mate... although they claimed each other.. an have only basically had oral sex....
Story is Great.. love the detail. .. thoroughly enjoy the Werewolf theme... but we need some Erotic sex an live making. ..
