All Comments on 'Utopia Ch. 01'

excellent start. i hope this story develops into a series. you've established the character well i think.

An excellent, if short, first story. Look forward to more.

I loved the concept and the writing. For a story based on a virtual reality, it seemed more real than many other stories I've read; mine included. I'm moving on to Ch. 02 with anticipation.

This reply is like the story - having been written long ago and then no additional stories by the author - damn!

We are pavlovian - and just add our replies!

Excellent.