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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Nice story I would love for my wife to do this hopefully soon one of these days.

EspressoBolusEspressoBolusalmost 10 years ago
Sense of time

At the start of your story you mention the action takes place " a couple weeks ago". But at the end you have the adventurous wife disclose "to this day I have never told Jeff what had happened". To this day has the reader infer that a long time has passed and actually that would add spice to the story. A long held secret is one she treasures.

Also, this story begs for a companion piece explaining what Jeff and Rita did on their walk!

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Hi my name is Nisa, I am your average girl next door with a zest for life. I would consider myself a splash of class with a twisted sense of humor. I love to flirt, laugh, show off my clothing and body. I was born in Korea however now living in the USA. I enjoy the littles thi...