All Comments on 'Vacation Fun'

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As for chookabutt or whoever listen creep you're entitled to your opinion about all things that distress you in Loving Wives. But you should be moving into the acceptance stage by now about how fucked up your life is. You've been trolling here years. Maybe then you could move on (please)or just hang around in the incest category. Your contributions to this great site, as with all commenters, speak far louder of your own being than of the authors. I liked the style and tone of this story. It's kinda light and fluffy. It's naughty even has a little depth in human attribution. I so much prefer people who get off on hotwife stories(a different kettle of fish to cheating wives)than say, people who get off on fucking their mother...but I'm not in that category trolling the stories. So thanks authors for the entertainment...

Seems to be a different set of comments from what I saw before. Interesting.

Too illiterate for me to venture past four paragraphs.....

Standard fare, nothing noteworthy and not very well told. So all-in-all not really worth reading. Just kinda boring.

Use the LIT Volunteer Editor option. The word mechanics are just terrible. The flow of the story...who is talking to whom and about what?...is just plain confusing. Figure out what a paragraph means.

The story is fairly stock Hubby Watches Sweetie Misbehave at a Bar. Just not well done!

The story was boring. And any white dude that looks to a black man to please his wife has the spine of a jellyfish and the balls of a hummingbird and a dick like a limp spaghetti noodles....be a man...grow a pair

Finally Anonymous says something that I can totally agree with

'nuff said.

just do it like you thought of originally... take the stranger and your husband back to the room and let him watch...do it right or not at all