by authorotica
Very good. Provocative without pandering to tired cliches. Knew where it was headed but tension still there at the end. Good work!
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This was a fun story. Loved the silent partner (although I did suspect the friend). Got a little confused though on what position they put her in. Broke the flow of the story when she was seated and leaning forward on something yet was getting eaten and her nipples sucked while she sucked her lovers nipples too. Still would love another chapter telling what happens when she's released!