All Comments on 'Valerie and the Bachelor'

I can say with certainty that my wife would never, ever degrade to this shit.

Uncomfortable

She respected herself highly but really? I cannot believed she stooped so low just to be noticed.

In any sane persons mind how is this romance? Tony Kiwi

Make that a TON of unbelievable that a young woman like that would do anything but turn around and leave the party. You've painted a picture of a virginal, naive young woman and there is no logical reason she would have to do anything but leave. One more chapter to give it a chance.

You put that in the ''Romance'' category. I saw no romance there at all. I hope,you plan on continuing with this story,so you can do it justice

PLEASE write more!!! i love it

i hope this will not be the last we read of valerie! awesome stuff, keep it up! xxO jac