All Comments on 'Valerie's Thing'

It's the second ending.

...the second ending! Somewhere out there is a woman who will love and respect Harvey. Five stars ⭐️ for this one.

Typically JPB, not finishing a story and always the husband as the wimp. Nothing new⭐️

What would the wife character say, when he'd turn the tables using her logic: "Honey it would be then acceptable for you, if I get a handjob from someone other than you?"

It would just prove that not all hubby characters in your stories are practically brain-dead......

Loved the walking away part but it lets the cheaters off the hook! I mean, naked in his bedroom? Why isn't he stomping that guys guts out? It made him into nothing but a wimp!

Screw that first ending. Harvey was made out to be a super wimp, and takes back his hand job giving wife, who is a slut. Valerie has no real love for Harvey otherwise she would have discussed her disappointment in him.... Now the second ending is more like it. He had the balls to tell her like it is. She is a slut, and it is only time before she starts giving up more than hand jobs. A little disappointed he didn't HELP her lover out the door when he caught them but oh well. Looks like a divorce will happen here. Good story but it depends on how you end it... Second one is my choice.

Screw you bob you picked the right name just-plain

Bob’s “happy ending” is taking back the slut?!? You’re insane!

You take what could be good stories and completely hose them

On top of that you tend to write really shitty women in that I need to drag the reader around emotionally or else it wont work.

I need to just stop reading what you write.

Think you got your endings mixed up there, Bob. On second thought, she'd been doling out 'happy endings' for quite a while, so maybe these are redundant.

Who says JPB doesn't finish his stories?

Yeah for the DONT'S!!!!!!! Fuck her and she rode in on

"Happy ending" is a man turning into miserable wimp. Just like JPB with his "I wanted to rush in ... but then I thought better of it" wimp nonsense.

"Not a happy ending" is a sermon?

What a garbage, but a usual garbage from JPB with his pinkneck characters from Michigan trailer park. Racists, bigots, town whores, beer-stinking-bar-hoping idiots ready to moralize about women they cannot keep. The worst of all, JPB thinks highly of himself as an "author." That garbage you write you can only post here and get your 5 stars from other pinkneck morons.

Like the second ending better

Stupid story about stupid husband.

2 starrs

Second ending was definitely the best.

Les

“And for those who don’t “ was definitely the best ending. Harv and Valerie should have split up long ago, with her cheating and him putting his sporting weekends a priority, they didn’t have a chance.

First no endings then a choice of 2. Liked both

There can only be one ending and it doesn't include Harv staying.Take the bitch for all you can get.

Not a fan of dual endings to stories like this. Seems like trying to please everyone either it's the writers story or not. Multiple choice endings detract from the original idea in my view.

Glad to see an ending at all, now two. WOW! Have to say the second one is the better. Glad to see one where the man has balls.

Even tho it's an all too real and sadder ending. The last ending is the correct one with him walking out, if u let the whole hand job thing slide then u would be giving her tacit approval to continue that bullshit for the length of the marriage. It seems she would jump at that chance too unless u spent every single weekend with her which is nearly impossible. So cut bait, find a good one, childhood love doesn't last anyways.

Last ending is better

both endings are cuck stories .

one star

The 'unhappy' ending was far happier than the 'happy' one. What kind of fuckhead thinks that his wife giving out handjobs is nothing much to worry but if she fucks some other man it's a deal breaker?

5/5 stars for second ending.

1/5 stars for first ending

jopstorm1945

Good job. Reality does happen on this site. No self respecting husband would tolerate her behavior. She needs to find herslf a wimp or a swinger for a husband. I've heard of men that actually enjoy seeing their wives with other men. I however do not subscribe to that lfestye. Mutual consent would be the only way a situation like this could work.

Second ending wax fitting

5 stars for the 2nd ending, 1 for the 1st. I hate cuck stories, even as an option. So the 1 wins.

I enjoyed reading the 2 endings. I would chose #2 but had to think about it a second.

The second ending is the only option.

Second ending has more truth in it: Valerie's attitude post-discovery was not that of a woman who values her husband and her marriage. First ending doesn't address that issue.

I disagree on which ending was happy. The dude had no self respect in the first version.

Second for me, she was too selfish to get the first option.

Second ending! Kick her ass top the curb!

Him leaving the bitch was the right thing to do. She is a slut. It is only a matter of time for her to go all the way. Hand jobs and tit sucking meant total lack of respect to her husband. Now, let's eait for the revenge on the slut.

The last ending was the best.