All Comments on 'Vanessa and My Dad Ch. 01'

by Blackcarp

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peebudypeebudyover 9 years ago
nice twist

I honestly did not know where this story was going, which made it hotter. the father showed amazing restraint, which hopefully will crumble in chapter 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
need ch2

I've been checking everyday for ch2

CrankThzJackInDaBoxCrankThzJackInDaBoxalmost 9 years ago
HOW DARE YOU MAKE:

STORY THAT SO EXCELLENT \ STORY THAT'S SO AWESOME

< THENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN > NEVER RETURN

WITH MORE ... ... ... ANOTHER AUTHOR NEEDS TAKE THIS HERE

FINISHING THIS WITH THEIR OWN VIEWS BECAUSE YOU

REFUSE CONTINUE

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awful. I couldn't make out what was happening

I kept hoping that it would get better, it didn't. Nice try, but no prize

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