by Blackcarp
I honestly did not know where this story was going, which made it hotter. the father showed amazing restraint, which hopefully will crumble in chapter 2.
STORY THAT SO EXCELLENT \ STORY THAT'S SO AWESOME
< THENNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN > NEVER RETURN
WITH MORE ... ... ... ANOTHER AUTHOR NEEDS TAKE THIS HERE
FINISHING THIS WITH THEIR OWN VIEWS BECAUSE YOU
REFUSE CONTINUE
Awful. I couldn't make out what was happening
I kept hoping that it would get better, it didn't. Nice try, but no prize