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ironsoldier80ironsoldier80about 7 years ago
Fabulous work

Welcome back after five years.

I've added this to my list of favorite stories along with your other story. I dearly love the main character Al. His deep respect, compassion and caring shown by him to his lovers is absolutely astounding. A quality as rare as the rarest of gems. Makes me feel like the may still be hope it there for our half of the species.

I do want you to know while I deeply enjoyed your previous story and I laud this one as well, I did not enjoy this story as much. The is a lot of story to enjoy, however, right in the middle you the me for a complete loop with Al's drugging and subsequent rape and the forced raping of another character. Ashley was very fortunate that some of Al's quality still filtered through even in his severely altered state or you would have been writing about a much different, more painful and devastating experience for both people involved. Consent must happen on some level for it to be good and you took all levels of consent away from Al in that one scene. I was sorry to read that, but glad your characters were able to move past that.

Thank you for the new story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story line

Thoroughly enjoyed the plot twist, am sure that others as well as myself would enjoy Susan getting a little pay back for her trickery towards Al. I wait your next story with anticipation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing story

You are a very talented writer. I look forward to more of your works.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago
amazing story

This sequel to Double D is amazing, with great characters and a plot that has many twists and turns. An exciting drama from start to finish, it is fully deserving of a Five stars rating.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Weird. And not in a good way...

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