All Comments on 'Vice Ch. 03'

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FlamingHailsFlamingHailsover 11 years ago

I love this story. It's so hot! Can't wait to hear what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
WWOWW!!!! X

That was hot! Can't wait for the next installment. Let's see if the dad is man enough gay enough to let the son screw him. Pls no 3 ways though,because I think Paul is in love with the dad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hot

hot, maybe would like to see some 3 ways, but between Father, Son, and Chad. But eventually have the dad pair off with Paul, and Brian with Chad or someone else

rptr106rptr106over 11 years ago
Best story

I've never read a better story. You have a gift! Please hurry and write more of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Hot

Your writing has become more focused and mature. I read this and wonder how far you have come since 'Free Wolf'. I wish you'd edit that series again. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
superb!

i'd love a session between Dad and Chad while Brian watches........and looking forward to Brian having a go at Dad, too; he's as much a man as his dad is and Jay might love it just like Uncle Paul did

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Wow. I love cliffhangers. Even though they've existed since Jesus's time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Ohmyyy

Love this! So hot, thank you. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
when

Does the next installment come out?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
nice and hot!

when's the next one coming? this doesn't look like a proper cliffhanger.....hope there'll be some wet-dream worthy action ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Jumble

These stories are too much of a jumble.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

So hungry for the next chapter. I want Brian to fuck his dad! The story is set up so well. I read it from time to time and just hope you'll revisit it one day.

lynn1964lynn1964about 8 years ago
Aching

My mind and loins are aching for the next chapter. My heart, that of a die hard romantic, wants so much for Brian and his Father to become lovers. Their love for each other is that rare PRIMAL LOVE that goes far beyond lust and romance.

Thank You

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Needing the finish

Please! I need to read the finish of their discussion...also wanna know if Brian fuck his dad too

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hot!

I wish there were more chapters of this. It's so hot.

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