by carsonshepherd
I loved it, it was well paced, well written and just fine.great job.
Writing is an art and you really know how to paint with words. Beautiful story.
Your way with words never ceases to amaze me. I wish I had half your talent.
Someone who tops from the bottom!
I am enjoying this so much, reacquainting myself with your stories!
Hot, intense, fun. Loved it. I'm loving them all. Keep up the sexy goodness.
"You know what I fucking hate? Someone who fucking tops from the bottom." I LUV that! I'm hating/loving you more with each story. I'm jealous of/grateful for evey one of them that I have read. Keep it up. (No pun intended...LOL)
Never have truer words been spoken. Awesome and exciting tale. Fun to top from the bottom, if you can get away with it. *smirk*
Maestro, play on!
I like what you did with this -- honed right in on the intensity and left that bothersome plot shit in the hallway. ;o) ~Imp
I give you two thumbs up cause I only got two but I gave you a five vote, good story, Lisa.
my ass...or your ass!! :) I LOVE IT...it was hot, exciting. I'd say you're the tops...but I guess you're the bottom kinna fits??
~ Honey
myself, but this is a gritty "view from the top" as it were. Proof that a stroke story can be as rewarding as a more "profound" tale, I enjoyed the white-hot intensity of this!
Phew! Another example of exceptional writing from a very talented writer who never fails to amaze me with his evocative ( or should I say, provocative...) style and overwhelming passion.
You give the absolute best writing exercise I have ever had. The way you write makes my toes curl, my head spin and…nevermind. :o What I meant to say is that your work is redolent in sensuality and you paint a wickedly perfect picture with words. Excellent.
Carson, this was just so freakin'hot. You never cease to amaze me. This line especially rocked me: 'I twist silently crucified on the head of a pin for an eternal motionless moment until he moves again'
Damn, boy! Just completely different and brilliant as usual. Love, S.
This story has the unmistakable ring of truth. Having been in a similar situation, I can tell you a pushy bottom can be lots of fun for an enlightened Top.
Hot and steamy. You never disappoint! And God help me, I'm actually getting used to "all the sudden"!