All Comments on 'Village Life'

by Desi Ghee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A slow but realistic story.

Very realistic almost a true story but very slow. I think this is the first attempt of the writer. For people who are not familiar with the village life in that part of the world it is boring. Lot of time is taken in building up the story.It is a good realistic story but very slow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice

I enjoyed your story very much. The misspellings were few and in general it was what I really enjoy reading: a HAPPY story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Realistic like story

Really it was well narrated realistic looking story. Story builds slowly.. but firmly. Confused with 2 aunts!! But manageable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
really good

really seemed realistic and detailed and it is always these stories that have the most power and are the easiest to believe

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Brilliant

absolutly brilliant narration i came twice while readin it mind blowing keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Nice story

Its a nice story. It may be slow but is sensual. I think most of the writers here are amatures and by that standard its good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
mazaidar yar

exellent stuff i enjoyed it alot almost orgasmed.please keep writing iam your fan from now on.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
TERI MAA KA BHOSDA

maa chudao saale ......... teri kahani padhne ke baad muth maar maar kar pareshan hoon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Incest - Expression of Real and skillful Wisdom

Enjoying incest relations is great . It is real time adventure to test ones capability and potential to trap ones around and in family. It needs skillful wisdom to bring closest and loved ones to break through social bounds . In start at least for the first time it feels quite nervous like same as depicted in this storey but once in it is chain of endless and everlasting relations giving confidance and making sharp planner to trap family members . Again it is easy , it saves time , money and makes round the clock availability without any fare of blackmailing or defame as respact is of both and is protected and no one dares to make it public. I am enjoying incest since girl hood and proud to be wise and sharp enough . I have succeded to trap almost every male in my family including brother , sister, mom , uncle and even brother in law . Sex needs no bounds and equally enjoy lesbian. In my student life I started to relieve myself from pressures of exams and it helped a lot to continue my stidies by being satisfied within my home. I am lady doctor now and still miss no chance to enjoy incest. Now a days I am planning to trap my own son as I know he will soon start fucking his girl friends then why should I not enjoy his first fuck , i.e, always strong and vigorous . I have no time to write my experiences as I remain engaged in my medical professional services. I am a gynacologist in lahore .

However let me make it clear that I have never tried to expnad my sex experience out side my family members nor I like as men outside family become blackmailers which I may not risk .

I love reading incest stories and request all involved to send and post me at the address

saeedachoudhary@hotmail.com

Whenever I got time to write my own experiences I will share all of you but after changing names as respect of every family member is manadatory.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
hairy armpits

Please describe her hairy armpits......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Fuck you

simply rubbish......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Idiot

Don't mix religion with this

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
u is a son of a bitch

ur a bumbaclot yo in jamaica we would kill ya for tis shit u son of a bitch. hope u die slowly and with pain u son of a bitch. Kingston RULES!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Amazing!

This is an awesome story, i love how it builds up really slow with the tension increasing as naeem looks at his aunt more and more often, also their conversation is very touching.

Great stuff! please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Well written, great story. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Excellent write-up

Very well written.

dezzirabledezzirablealmost 3 years ago

Amazingly written, loved the desi touch of the nala, shalwar and kameez

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good prmise.

Sex is too mechanical. Not erotic at all.

Two stars.

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