All Comments on 'Virgin on Bourbon Street'

This story was totally hot, but not just erotica. Really, just perfect. I'm not quite sure about the revenge angle, though.

Definitely well worth the read.

Great story of a boy losing his innocence. The non-erotic twist at the end really makes this stand out for me.

My version of this happened on a Sunday when I went downtown to buy a pair of tennis shoes. I ended up only losing $15 in exchange for 3 minutes of lazy dancing from a "Gypsy woman" and then "choking my chicken" while driving home. I came just as I was entering the interstate on-ramp. LUCKILY, no wreck - HA! It was 45 years ago, but I remember it, clearly and intensely, as if it were five minutes ago.

Really well written, not rushed and plenty of detail. I just wish there was a follow-up to it - Revenge on Bourbon Street. It was a great story, well told and original.

(Would love to see it continued!!!)

many thanks

It does 'nt sound like it ends there add some more cause that s a pretty flat ending

I'm guessing that Vanessa took one single picture with what she probably knew to be the kid's father's camera. He was so far out of it that she could have climbed onto his face before he'd have noticed.

Pretty good story. You captured his innocence as easily as the women did. It was quite convincing. Too bad there wasn't any joy in the exchange, yet that's part of the world you showed to us through his eyes.

I'm hoping that revenge thing has a warmer, happier ending (or demons).

Great kinda deep story for this website. The boy does become a man in more than one way.

Nice story. Your stories are a delight to read.

I am not sure if the boy really got a bad deal. At least, he received a fair variety of sexual pleasures from multiple women, starting with stroking, cock sucking, tit fucking and finally a woman impaling on his cock and pussy fucking him, finishing him with an intense orgasm and release. The women took care to put a condom on him before the penetrative sex. I don't know the going rates but even for a cheap joint, that wasn't so bad. The boy can think back and may be forgive them. He can put this experience to good use in his sex with his first girl friend.

Great story. Thanks.