by jackalpup
This was the worst one i have read. The plot is running all over. All together it was shit. I will give it a big fat 0.
maybe little more description...of details of story. fill me in what happening...sex scene was superb just where am I...am I familiar watching this love scene. what heck was with glass table wasn't there suppose to be altar or something.
Virgin Sacrifice means people are either suppose to die or change the meaning say virgin deflowerment might make headway what your getting out.
Also Scanning through felt very rushed. proof read your work. It does to wonder if you do read it through.
I can understand the witch, but what was importance of Jack. was he just thug or igor who brings the virgins...or what was happening there?
Witch gave me thought this was more sci fi sort thing,
green skin and well who want that between your legs.
My clit was throbbing after this I love the short mysterious stories