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by sensualsweety5

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great Story

A little too formal with the writing but excellent job

RossDanielsRossDanielsover 12 years ago
Hot story

Lets see where it goes from here!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Jonathan

My name is Jonathan. Everytime some yokel puts that h where it doesn't belong, whatever he is writing is doomed.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Smoothly erotic

Loved the build up and the interaction between the characters- great subject and beautifuly written! Looking forward to more from you(no pressure LOL!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Nice!

A great story so far 5 out of 5, please continue.

sensualsweety5sensualsweety5over 12 years agoAuthor

Hey guys, loved hearing your feedback! Jonathan, I apologize for the misspelling, I actually have a lot of Jonathans in my family and I think me writing fast lead to accidentally adding another unnecessary "h". If I could go back and edit it I would.

The second chapter to this tale is waiting for approval.

Love hearing from you,

Sensualsweety5

peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
love it!

I just love fuck the sitter stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

This story was HOT! I can't believe you just left us hanging!! *lol*

And it's your story, you can spell Jonathon however the hell you want. So there. :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
start

Great start to a longer story. I recall when I babysat, only once did I ever dream Mr Scott would seduce me but it never happened. I had a friend that had sex a few times with one of the husbands she babysat for but after that she was never asked back. Please keep writing!

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