All Comments on 'Virtual Sexuality Ch. 01'

Great work. A difficult subject handled very well. Good pacing and a nice mix of thoughtful issues and enticing sex. You have a real writing skill.

Very well written, loved the twist at the end. Hopefully you'll let us know what happens next. I can't wait to find out!

The story line and the sex were good, but the many typos and grammar issues detracted from the story and kept me from fully enjoying it.

Wow what a twist. If this was real i would so love to be a girl and be a slut

Very very hot, loved it!

The story could have used a more plausible and detailed description of the virtual reality machine. Also, it doesn't make sense for the system to mess with your time perception such that idleness will take extra long unless that's what you subconsciously want, which I suppose is what Jacqueline wanted.